By directsun, posted to r/OSR.
Here’s my initial comments from the thread:
Nice work! For my own game, I would probably tone down their arms and armor proficiencies and maybe lower their hit die. Their abilities all seem front-loaded. I would use a thief-skill or Cleric Turn Undead style progression (whichever thief progression you favor) to both spread them out and offer some kind of growth over the career. I like the stronghold feature but I want to know what is a Chap and what sort of income is involved? (I’d also want to caveat that Stronghold income does not count towards leveling… unless you want it to of course.)